James 100WCGU

I must get myself better organised and keep up with the 100 Word Challenge for Grown-Ups! Having missed a week somehow, I’m now back on track for week 47.
This week’s prompt is a photograph:
 
 
 
James loved his new play set. It filled the entire floor of his room but as he lay on his tummy, head level with all the buildings, he entered a whole new world where he knew everyone and all of their comings and goings. His favourite building, without doubt, was the garage. He loved its bright colour and distinctive teapot shape. But it was the girl who owned it that he adored most of all. Sarah was always there for him when he wanted to talk. He told her his biggest secrets and shared with her his joys and fears.

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4 responses to “James 100WCGU

  1. This is lovely – you have captured the world of a child convincingly. Thank you for sharing.

  2. How wonderful to find someone to adore and to share your inner most secrets 🙂

  3. I agree with the above comments, this is lovely.

  4. I loved this Lynda. As Ali says – you've written from the child's viewpoint really convincingly.

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